About Face: Some Thoughts On Redesigning My About Page
I’ve been meaning to do a couple of things for a long time now: rewrite my resumé, and redesign my About Page. Here I am brooding about it:
Ever heard that wonderful Buddhist proverb, When the student is ready, the teacher will appear? I thought of it last week when I chanced across an article by Michael Margolis called The Resume Is Dead, The Bio Is King.
It begins with this premise: Gone are the days of “Just the facts, M’am.” Instead, a potential client wants to know if you’re relevant to his or her work. Further: Trust comes from personal disclosure– something a traditional resume isn’t suited for. Instead, you need a bio that tells the bigger story– especially if you’re in business for yourself.
The author suggests that you share more of what you really care about. “Tell a story that people can identify with as their own, and the need to persuade, convince, or sell them
on anything disappears.”![]()
This doesn’t mean you can ignore the ol’ skill set, of course: if you haven’t got skills that somebody wants, the best storytelling in the world isn’t going to get you hired.![]()
But assuming you’ve got the necessary skills, the premise makes sense to me. And it really came to together when I read the following line in 6 Steps To Creating A Knockout Online Portfolio by Mell Ravenel:![]()
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Personalize your About page to tell your story, not just list your past jobs.![]()
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That was what I needed to hear. I have a job history, a paper trail, but my early jobs weren’t art-related. What art director is going to care that I was once a bank teller or a methods analyst? My story’s no thrills-and-chills spellbinding adventure, but it’s a lot more interesting than my job history.
At this point, you may be wondering: What did your old About Page look like?– was it really that bad? Yes, it was– here’s a screen shot of the entire page:
Oh, it tells you a little, and it had links to my work and some client testimonials. But does
it make you say: Hmm! I need an illustrator, and this is my kinda guy! I got a good feeling here– I’m gonna call him and take a chance!!![]()
Uh… not really. There’s just not enough to go on, not enough to prompt that leap of faith.![]()
So I needed to tell my story and give people a chance to identify with it– where to start?
Fortunately, Mr. Margolis had some suggestions. Boiled down as low as they will go, I’d summarize them as follows:![]()
1. Share a point of view: How do you see the world? What matters most?
2. Tell your backstory: How did you get where you are? What riddles are you still trying to solve?
3. Include “external validators”: Client testimonials, awards, etc– just a few to show your story is real.
4. Make yourself approachable: Share an interest or guilty pleasure. “Vulnerability is the new black.” (use good sense)![]()
Being an illustrator, I’d add one more:![]()
5. Get yourself some visuals: Stories with pictures get a lot more interest than stories with just text.![]()
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So I wrote My Story, keeping it as short and simple as possible. I also created visuals to serve as “chapter headings”– like this one for sharing my point of view as an illustrator:
And this rather, uh, infantile piece for my “backstory”:
Before I forget: the About image (of me brooding) at the top of this post is a doctored still from a video clip. I was playing the character of Inky Draws, The World’s Oldest Cartoonist. You can see a short clip of the production here.![]()
So how’d my New About Page turn out? See for yourself: you can either click About
in the menu bar under my blog header, or just click here: Gosh whiz! I’m just dying
to see Mark Armstrong’s exciting new About Page. (And I’d appreciate your feedback, thanks.)![]()
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What do you think? Is a person’s About Page as important as they say? Have you incorporated any special features on your own About Page that you’d care to share? Hope you’ll leave a comment.![]()
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