Stumped? Let Your Subconscious Solve The Problem For You
Here’s a story about a greeting card design, shoveling snow, and letting your subconscious do the work.
I was working on a Christmas card design. I thought I had a sure-fire gag: “burning” CD’s by putting them in a toaster.
I needed a funny payoff line inside the card, and some sort of setup line (text) on the outside along with the drawing.
My original idea for the setup line was “I burned you a couple of CD’s.” And because it was a Christmas card, I made one CD red, and the other green. So the front looked like this:
For the inside payoff line, I thought one of these might work:
“Pretty hot stuff. Merry Christmas!”
“You do like Christmas carols, I hope.”
“Ho-ho-ho. Merry Christmas!!”
But it all fell flat. The joke was there, I could feel it– but it wasn’t working. Something was wrong, and I couldn’t figure out what it was.
Eventually I walked away from it (which is always hard for me to do).
Not sure how much time elapsed, but I was out shoveling snow last week, not thinking of anything in particular, when suddenly the answer popped into my head: the “I burned you a couple of CD’s” belonged inside the card as the payoff line.
I decided to use “You like Christmas carols, am I right??” as the setup line, and “Good. I burned you a couple of CD’s” as the payoff line inside.
I made a few other tweaks as well (described below). Here’s a compare. Click the image to see the compare at full-screen size.
Besides giving your subconscious time to solve a problem, letting an image lie has another advantage: when you revisit it, you suddenly see corrections that are needed, and/or ways to improve the image.
I saw that my “smoke puff lines” needed to expand to fit the entire smoke cloud.
If you click to enlarge the compare, you’ll see that the original toaster settings bar was brown which clashes with the surrounding black trim.
And finally, adding a red border gave the card a cheerier, more finished look.
So next time you’re stuck, walk away, do some grunt work, and let your subconscious solve the problem for you.
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Hi Mark… I agree with you completely! Though, my best place to develop the right ideas is not shoveling snow, it’s on the can doing my duty. I actually designed my house there, over a period of time of course. Everyone has their special place I guess. Creatives like us do strange things sometimes.
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Ha!!– the can!!– that’s where I usually go to rest up and recuperate after shoveling snow!! 🚽😅😴 Aw, man–!! Do forgive this very, VERY late reply, John– I musta dozed off!– that’s what happens when you get too relaxed!!
I’ll be thinking about you using that particular “staging area” to design your house– the mind, she boggles!! 😂 Thanks for your mirthful comment, and for being one of my favorite people– hope your new year’s off to a great start!! 🥳
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Brilliant advice, my dear friend and I love the outcome! Would be overjoyed to receive this card! Ambrosia headed your way… rivers of it!
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I was carried away on a raging river of nectar, and finally washed ashore on The Banks of Ecstasy!!– what a ride, what a thrill!!– I’m ready to do it again!! 😋💦
Thank you, Dearest Marina!! Please forgive this outrageously late reply. It’s a long walk from the Ecstasy Banks back to New Hampshire, but I was smiling all the way, singing through the entire MK-O Songbook, which I have, of course, memorized!! 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🕺🕺🕺🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🚶♂️💥 ____________________ 🚑👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽👽🥰
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Late? You are never late!
A fresh stock of ambrosia is flowing your way!
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Now, if you could just burn the snow off the walk!
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Aw, man– that’s one of my favorite fantasies!! Ha!– thanks, Margy!! 👍😊
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Hi Mark, showing your age there with CDs 😄😉. My grandkids burn music and games on those flash drive thingies my wife and I call sticks. The last time I burned sticks was roasting hotdogs and marshmallows at a Cub Scouts jamboree 🤪. But you’re right. We artists (and writers) must spend time away from our works in progress before we can identify problems in them.
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Ha!!– showing my age!– you’re right, amigo, I am!!– I’m still shocked to think that nowadays, you can’t buy a new car that has a CD player!!
But who needs a new car??– I drive a 1998 Chevy Malibu which has, I believe, The World’s Last Remaining Cassette Tape Player!! Ain’t nobody gonna catch me when I go roarin’ down the road listening to The Kingston Trio!! 😂
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